Barron's IELTS PRACTICE EXAMs
Academic Module

Version: Draft

Today's Score : 100 (18/10/2011)
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TOPIC :

Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world.

How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your oen knowledge or experience.


In the modern life, the environment of life is change. Technology makes life easier and more efficiently than before. People can get their needs in an instant way. They just push on a button then food is ready. They just take a sit and then play a remote control, and then they can control many things without make a movement.

Not only adult but also children can feel the easier life is now. It makes children like to stay at home because they can get everything they want. They can play easily at home since there are games, tools, and other stuffs for playing. They can eat many kind of food any food that they like just from home; they only need to get the phone and call for delivery food, and then it will come to them.

The disadvantage of this kind of life life like this is children will do not know about the natural world. They have already enjoyed the easy life. They do not know and maybe do not want to know about the natural world. They do not know about the natural resources such as plants, animals, air, water, wind, and other. If they do not know about that, they will not have a sense of belonging to the natural resources. Besides, they are the next generation who will use the natural resources. They do not know because there is no one who tells them about that. They only know about the technology.

People not only need technology but also know about the natural world. People cannot split both of those things. Children need to know about this knowledge too. They need to meet the natural world. It makes their life complete their lives feel complete, because they will know about the modern one and the natural one. It will make them want to keep both of them.



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