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WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
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The consumer durables in Britain move up rapidly from 1972 to 1983. Percentage of household with central heating move rapidly from 1972 to 1974. The most incredible improvement is on 1974 where the percentage moves up from only 3% in 1972 to become 43% in 1974. After that, the percentage stays steady until 1983 with a little improvement in every 2 years.
The percentage of households with television and vacuum cleaner has a little improvement. Households with television have totally 5% improvement from 1972 to 1983 while vacuum cleaner has 8% around those years.
People in Britain also use refrigerator, washing machine, and telephone around those years. In 1972, people in Britain already use refrigerator and washing machine. The percentage of households with refrigerator and washing machine always move up in every two years.
Video and dishwasher are two things that rarely use by people in Britain. They start to use dishwasher in 1978 and not many people like to use this because the percentage is stay steady until 1983.
In 1983, people know about video and start to use that. It starts with 18%.
This report shows the consumer durables in Britain from 1972 to 1983. People in Britain have an improvement in using household year by year with the old one and also move to the new one.
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Score by Grammarly : 84
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fronita
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