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Popular events like football World Cup and other International sporting occasions can make international tensions and patriotic emotion of citizen in a country move up. This event can be a place to release citizen patriotic emotion in a safe way.
Sea games XXVI in Jakarta and Palembang that held on 11th of November until 22th November 2011 is one of many examples of International sporting occasions. Many citizens in Indonesia are releasing their patriotic emotion to support Indonesian team in this Sea Games. It is not only in football but also in other kind of sport. Many people come from their main area to Jakarta and Palembang to give their support to Indonesian team. They want to make Indonesian team get the gold medal in this Sea Games. In this condition, Indonesian people are not the only supporters who come to give spirit to their team, but also there are many people from other country who join in this sea Games that spend their time to come to Indonesia to give their support.
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The other event is World Cup. People from all over the world try to come to the place where World Cup is held. They want to give support to their team. They wear their team uniform. Some of them use many accessories from their team. Sometimes they try to make temporary tattoo in their body to show up their support. They show their patriotic emotions.
International events like Sea Games can make all citizens have same emotion. They have patriotic emotion to support their team. It is an action of releasing emotion in the safe way. They do many things to express their emotion in supporting their country. They make the countries athletes have more spirit to do the games. It will make them have more power to win the games. It is really a good way to express emotion for people.
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Tuesday, November 29, 2011
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Bulan November ini lagi semangat2nya buat cari uang tambahan hehe. Sebenernya karena ketularan semangat sama dia siah. Soalnya dia semangat bgd deh, ampe coding malem2 lagi kya dlu hihihi. Seneng liat dia semangat, jadinya ikutan semangat deh.
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WRITING TASK 2
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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Crime is a bad thing. Almost in every place in the world, there will be a criminal. A crime can happen because of many things. A criminal has many reasons to do their actions. The most commonly reason is lake of money to fulfill their needs. People can do anything to fulfill their main needs. This reason can make people forget about rule of law. They just think about how to get money. It will cause many criminal.
Every criminal must get punishment. It depends on rule of law of every country. It can be different, but the main function is the same. There are many kinds of punishment. Usually it depends on the kind of crime. Capital punishment or the death penalty is the highest punishment of the world. Every country has agreed about this. If a country does this kind of punishment, it must be for a very dangerous crime that causes many troubles to many people.
A statement says every country need to do capital punishment to control violence in society. If a country announces that there will be a capital punishment, criminal will be afraid. They will not try to do a crime because they feel afraid of the punishment. In other case, criminals will search a way to escape from the punishment. I do not agree that capital punishment can control violence in society because the main things we need to do is to keep people do right things. Government need to make people live in peace. They need to make a stabilize condition to make people can fulfill their main needs.
A country needs to have a capital punishment, but it can depend on that punishment to control violence. The main things that need to do is make a stabilize condition to make people can fulfill their needs without do a crime.
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The chart show us about Japanese tourists who are travelling abroad during 1985 to 1995. In 1985, there are 5.000.000 Japanese tourists who are travelling abroad. This value moves up rapidly in the next following year until 1990. In the 1991, this value moves down around 1.000.000 that the last year. During 1992 to 1992, the value stays steadily in 12.000.000 per year. According to the chart, the highest value of the Japanese tourists who are travelling abroad is on the 1995. Consequently, there is a steady increase for the Japanese tourists who are travelling abroad.
Japanese tourists have many destination for travelling abroad. One of them is Australia. The second chart shows about the percentage of Japanese tourists who come to Australia during 1985 to 1995. In 1985, there is only 2% of Japanese tourists who are coming to Australia. The first peak of the chart is in 1988 when the percentage gets around 4,75%. The next peak of the chart is on the 1993, the percentage of Japanese tourist who are coming to Australia reach up to 6% in a year while the lowest point is in 1989. After 1989, the percentage moves up rapidly until 1993 when it reaches the highest point. In the next year, the point moves down to only 6%. We can make a conclusion that Japanese tourists like to travel to Australia.
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WRITING TASK 1
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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The first chart shows us about UK residents who visit abroad. They have many purposes of their visits. This survey took from 1994 until 1998. The greatest purpose of UK residents visit abroad is for holiday.
In the last 1998, the quantities of UK residents who visit abroad take 20,700. The second purpose of UK residents visit abroad is for business. This reason has a high different quantity than the first purpose. UK residents like to visits to friends and relatives too. This reason has around 800 lower than the second purpose. This purpose has the highest point in 1998 while the lowest one is in the 1995. They also have others reasons for visiting abroad. The last reason get the highest point in 1997, but it get around 100 point lower in 1998.
With many kind of reason, UK residents have many kind of destination too. The second chart shows the destination of visits abroad by UK residents by main region from 1994 until 1998. The main destination of visits abroad by UK residents is Western Europe. The value always moves up from the first year until 1998. Only in 1995, this value moves down from 1994. The second destination is North America. In 1998, it reaches 1,823. UK residents visit other areas too. In 1998, others areas get 2,486.
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WRITING TASK 2
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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In the globalization era, women position has changed. Women act like men. They can work like men. Women can take a high education that can make them have a high position in their workplace. Furthermore, there is a woman who becomes a country leader. It is not a bad fact. Women have their right to do anything like men. They have right to get career like men. They can do that, but they should not forget their main character as a mother.
Mother is a greatest job in the world. Whatever condition of a woman in this world, she must to take this job. Women are the only human that can get pregnant and give a birth. After they have children, they must to take care of them. Women must give their care and love to their babies. Men must to love and care their children too, but only women who have a greatest relationship to the children especially when they are still babies.
Nowadays, there are many young problems such as juvenile delinquency. In many cases, this condition can happen because the young people are less of care from their parents. We cannot avoid women to work, but women need to realize about their character. They need to do their main character first than do their jobs. Women need to stay at home and take care of their children especially when they are still young. Women need to tell many things about life to their children. If children get a lot of love and care, they will not look for it outside their home by doing bad things.
It is not bad to get a high career for women, but women must make it balance with their main jobs in home. Women must be wise in reaching what their want if they have married and have children. If it happens, women can get a happy family and a high career. Their children can live happily too.
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WRITING TASK 1
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The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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Criminal cause many imprisonments. The chart shows about imprisonments between 1930 and 1980 in some big countries. Great Britain has the lowest imprisonments in 1930 with 30.000 people. Canada becomes the highest in 1930. It has 120.000 imprisonments in that year. Canada can keep its country in peace with the quality of imprisonment that becomes lowest in the nest following year. In 1980, Canada has only 70.000 imprisonments.
United States has move up its imprisonment in 1940. It moves up 10.000 imprisonments than 1930. This quality runs steadily in the next following years, but it reaches up again in 1980. United States gets the highest point in 1980 with 130.000 and become the highest from the others among 5 years.
Great Britain shows the lowest point in the first years, but it always moves up in the next year. Great Britain reaches 65.000 imprisonments in 1980. Australia can manage its country well. In 1930, Australia reaches 100.000 imprisonments, but it can move down to a half than before in the last 1980.
New Zealand becomes a country that stay steady from the beginning year to the end. It can moves down into almost a half than the first point in 1930, but it moves up again in the next year. In 1980, New Zealand gets 80.000 imprisonments that move up 10.000 than in 1930.
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- I have a small family.
- I have only two brothers, my elder brother, and my little brother. I am the only one daughter in my family. My elder brother is four years older than I am and my little brother is five years younger than I am. My Dad is an entrepreneur and my Mom is a homemaker.
- All of us meet each other every day. Sometimes we spend our time together by watching television at night. We spend around one until two hours to watch. After that, usually we are talking about our days.
- We like to watch television together. We like to eat together.
- Yes I do, because I feel that they love me so much. We always share our things together. Whenever we have a problem, we try to discuss and solve the problem together. I love my family and I know that they love me too.
I met him when I was in the last semester of my second year in the college. I met him when I want to give back the laboratory key to my laboratory assistant. He never teaches me before, but at that time, he felt curios about my study. He wanted to help me to do my final project. He gave me spirit to do my final project earlier that it should be. Although I felt that I could not do that, he always motivated me and gave me his great spirit to study. He told me that I should not give up when I met a problem until I cannot do anything. He believed that everybody has their own power that they may not know. He had taught me many things. It was not only material about my final projects but also additional knowledge. He gave me his great spirit. That was the most important things that I have not had before I met him. Because of him, I could finish my final projects in my final project in the beginning of my third year. It was one of greatest things in my life. I really felt happy at that time. I felt proud of him. I owed him for this one in all my life.
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WRITING TASK 2
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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
"Prevention is better than cure."
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
People need to keep their body health. In a health body, there will be a health mind. People can do many things when they are health. Sick is a terrible condition, because we cannot do many things alone. We need others to help us. Sometimes we need to stay at the hospital and follow many instructions from the doctors.
All people can sick. People need to prepare a budget for cure their sickness. They need to spare some money to prepare this condition. If people have a work, maybe they are easy to keep some of their money to face this situation. It is a hard thing to do for the poorer. Usually, our country prepares a budget for this situation. They try to spare some money for country health’s budget, so the government can help their citizens who do not have money when they are sick.
In spite of spare money for country health’s budget, the government needs to give a large proportion for spending on health education and prevention measures. They need to tell their citizens about health education especially for the poorer. People who live in town have knowledge more than people than live in the village, because they are easy to get news. The rich people have more knowledge than the poorer.
When people in a town get sick, they already know how to do. The poorer has different situation when they are sick. The poorer will let their sick be cure by their self because they do not have any money to go to the doctor. This situation can be worse and the poorer can be dying.
The government has a big responsibility in here. They need to tell them how to do even they do not have any money. They also need to pay for them when the poorer need to go to the doctor. Health education will make people know how to do in the first time when they are sick.
When many people have much knowledge in health, they can prevent the worse things in their life. They can try to be a health person, because they know how to do that.
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TLE adalah salah satu metode Enkripsi yang digunakan pada message yang menggunakan komunikasi Line Telepon. Message yang dikirimkan melalui line telepon selama ini tidak ter-enkrip karena media yang ada belum dapat melakukannya. Message yang dimaksud adalah message dari EDC (Electronic Data Capture) yang menggunakan format ISO 8583.
EDC berkomunikasi dengan HOST. Biasa disebut sebagai HOST yang merupakan media yang akan melakukan balasan terhadap message EDC. HOST akan memebalas format message ISO 8583 EDC dengan format yang sama. Sebelum sampai ke host, biasanya akan ada middleware lain ditengah EDC.
Yang paling biasa dipakai adalah Concentrator yang disebut NetAccess (sebenernya ini merk tapi dikantor biasa disebut gtu hehehehe) yang lainnya adalah NAC (sama euy) atau NCC (sama lagi hehehehe). Bagian ini akan melanjutkan message ke HOST. NetAccess yang digunakan, tidak dapat melakukan enkripsi jika menggunakan komunikasi DIAL UP, sedangkan jika dengan GPRS dan juga TCP/IP hal tersebut dapat digunakan. Metode yang digunakan adalah AES.
TLE yang sedang dipelajari ada 2, yaitu:
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bingung juga mau namain apa hehehe. ini dibuat sama IT HEAD saya, hebatlah dia mah. dia menggunakan HSM (Host Security Module) sebagai alat generate key untuk TLE. komponen utama TLE adalah Master Key dan Working Key. sesungguhnya komponen ini tidak asing karena digunakan pula untuk melakukan transaksi yang menggunakan PIN. namun jika menggunakan TLE maka akan ada 2 MK dan 2 WK dengan fungsi yang berbeda.
TLE jenis ini akan melakukan enkripsi dengan membungkus semua message yang ada dan akan lewat dengan suatu bit dan hanya akan menampilkan bit tertentu pada saat pengiriman. format yang digunakan harus ISO8583 karena itu adalah format standard. jadi nantinya semua message yang lewat akan selalu terlihat sama walaupun melakukan transaksi yang berbeda karena sudah dibungkus dengan format TLE yang ditentukan.
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ini juga ngga tau namanya tapi yaaa sudahlah namanya bgtu hehehehhe. kalau yang ini, maka message akan tetap seperti biasa saja kelihatannya, namun akan kehilangan beberapa bit yang crucial yang akan disimpan didalam 1 bit yang sudah ditentukan sebelumnya. metodenya masih sama, tetep membutuhkan Master Key dan Working key.
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EDC berkomunikasi dengan HOST. Biasa disebut sebagai HOST yang merupakan media yang akan melakukan balasan terhadap message EDC. HOST akan memebalas format message ISO 8583 EDC dengan format yang sama. Sebelum sampai ke host, biasanya akan ada middleware lain ditengah EDC.
Yang paling biasa dipakai adalah Concentrator yang disebut NetAccess (sebenernya ini merk tapi dikantor biasa disebut gtu hehehehe) yang lainnya adalah NAC (sama euy) atau NCC (sama lagi hehehehe). Bagian ini akan melanjutkan message ke HOST. NetAccess yang digunakan, tidak dapat melakukan enkripsi jika menggunakan komunikasi DIAL UP, sedangkan jika dengan GPRS dan juga TCP/IP hal tersebut dapat digunakan. Metode yang digunakan adalah AES.
TLE yang sedang dipelajari ada 2, yaitu:
1. TLE (1)
bingung juga mau namain apa hehehe. ini dibuat sama IT HEAD saya, hebatlah dia mah. dia menggunakan HSM (Host Security Module) sebagai alat generate key untuk TLE. komponen utama TLE adalah Master Key dan Working Key. sesungguhnya komponen ini tidak asing karena digunakan pula untuk melakukan transaksi yang menggunakan PIN. namun jika menggunakan TLE maka akan ada 2 MK dan 2 WK dengan fungsi yang berbeda.
TLE jenis ini akan melakukan enkripsi dengan membungkus semua message yang ada dan akan lewat dengan suatu bit dan hanya akan menampilkan bit tertentu pada saat pengiriman. format yang digunakan harus ISO8583 karena itu adalah format standard. jadi nantinya semua message yang lewat akan selalu terlihat sama walaupun melakukan transaksi yang berbeda karena sudah dibungkus dengan format TLE yang ditentukan.
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ini juga ngga tau namanya tapi yaaa sudahlah namanya bgtu hehehehhe. kalau yang ini, maka message akan tetap seperti biasa saja kelihatannya, namun akan kehilangan beberapa bit yang crucial yang akan disimpan didalam 1 bit yang sudah ditentukan sebelumnya. metodenya masih sama, tetep membutuhkan Master Key dan Working key.
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WRITING TASK 1
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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The chart shows leisure time in a typical week with different employment status and sex in 1996 to 1999. There are five different kinds employment in this chart. There are full time employed, part time employed, unemployed, retired, and housewives. There are only three different kinds of employment that contains of both sexes. There are employee with full time session of works, unemployed, and retired.
Unemployed males and retired males have the biggest leisure time in a typical week with about 90 hours of leisure time. Unemployed females and retired females take 20 hours below of unemployed males and retired males. The unemployed and retired have the same position even for males or females.
For Employed and housewives, there are only females in here. Females Housewives have about 55 hours of leisure time in a typical week while females employed has 5 hours below female’s housewives. There are two kinds of employee. Part time employed in this chart is for females only.
Full time employed is for females and males. Males full time employed has bigger leisure time than females full time employed. Males employed take about 50 hours of leisure time in a typical week while females full time employed have 35 hours of leisure time in a typical week.
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WRITING TASK 2
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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
People who work in a broadcasting company search for news all the time. They want to show their news to all people in the world. There are many media for broadcasting news. People have a different way in searching news. Some of them like to listen, so they usually listen to the radio to know about news. Some people like to listen and watch, so they usually spend their time to watch the television. The others one like to read, so they search news by reading a newspaper or a magazine. They like to read news when they have a free time. Sometimes they read news when they are in the public transportation.
If we read news through a different media, sometimes we get a different meaning of that news although it is the same news. When we just read the news by newspaper, we try to imagine about what the editors write in there. We try to guess what happen exactly through what we read. When we listen and watch the news through television, we need to think less than when we read a newspaper, because we do not need to imagine. We can see news clearly through television and know the meaning of the news.
News editor needs to choose what to broadcast through what media. They need to make it simple. They need to make people understand easily about the news. They need to recognize the response of the people who will watch their news.
The main purpose of news is to make people know and understand about news. The news editor needs to make people get that purpose when they watch, listen, or read news. All news have message to people. The news editor must have a good way to broadcast the bad news. The news editor can give an example of the way a thief does their action. It will make people be more careful. The other one is about the burglar. People can know about how to keep their house when they want to go.
When people hear and know news, they need to look at themselves. News is good to know, but not all news is good. When you hear news, understand it, take the good one, and throw out the bad one.
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WRITING TASK 2
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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Having career is important in life. Now, people try to not only work but also build their career in their workplace. When people want to join in a company, they try to ask about how is the career in there. They need to know whether they can grow up their career in their or not. In the past, people try to have at least one steadily career in their life. They need that to guarantee their life and their family for people who already have a family.
Nowadays, a single career is not enough. People try to have more than one career in their life. They try to join in some activity besides of their main job in order to have more money and career. Many people have more than one title. They try to join more than one company and have other position.
There are some ways for people today to reach several careers. Some of them try to find others ways of earning moneys. They try to join a multilevel marketing that will make them get money without leaving their main job. Some of them try to build their own company. They try with a little one like shop. They try to sell their goods by online, so they do not need to have a real shop yet. They can do this without leaving their main job too.
Other people try to get further education. They believe that if they can reach a high level of education, they can be easier to have several careers. These kinds of people go back to college to get their title after work. They do not leave their main job.
There are many ways for getting several careers. Many people think that a better life will come when they have several careers. I agree with this because when we have several careers, we can get several ways to get money. It makes us get more money than usual people who just do a single career. Although we need more effort than other when we want to have these careers, but we can get more than those people get too.
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Having career is important in life. Now, people try to not only work but also build their career in their workplace. When people want to join in a company, they try to ask about how is the career in there. They need to know whether they can grow up their career in their or not. In the past, people try to have at least one steadily career in their life. They need that to guarantee their life and their family for people who already have a family.
Nowadays, a single career is not enough. People try to have more than one career in their life. They try to join in some activity besides of their main job in order to have more money and career. Many people have more than one title. They try to join more than one company and have other position.
There are some ways for people today to reach several careers. Some of them try to find others ways of earning moneys. They try to join a multilevel marketing that will make them get money without leaving their main job. Some of them try to build their own company. They try with a little one like shop. They try to sell their goods by online, so they do not need to have a real shop yet. They can do this without leaving their main job too.
Other people try to get further education. They believe that if they can reach a high level of education, they can be easier to have several careers. These kinds of people go back to college to get their title after work. They do not leave their main job.
There are many ways for getting several careers. Many people think that a better life will come when they have several careers. I agree with this because when we have several careers, we can get several ways to get money. It makes us get more money than usual people who just do a single career. Although we need more effort than other when we want to have these careers, but we can get more than those people get too.
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WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
You should write at least 150 words.
Nowadays, many villages try to do a lot of development. They try to make themselves as a big country. Chorleywood is one of those villages that try to do many developments. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population increased steadily since in the middle of the nineteenth century. Chorleywood try to develop its environment as fast as its populations grow up. In 1868, Chorleywood has only main road and a little development. This development takes 5 years.
In the 1883, Chorleywood starts to make other development. It builds a station named Chorleywood station. Chorleywood starts to build this station and other development around the station from 1883 until 1922. It takes 9 years.
The Chorleywood starts to build another way for its transportation in 1970. It builds a motorway in that year. It also makes two points of its development that located near the Chorleywood station and besides the main road. The newest way for its public transportation facilities is the railway. The Chorleywood builds the railway in 1909. The last development in this village is six points in the right sides of Chorleywood station and along the motorway.
Chorleywood is a little village, but it can make a lot development. It is also has a steady population. With many facilities that it has developed today, it can grow to a small city in the next following year.
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goodnight ginger :)
udah tidur?sepertinya udah sih...
hmmmm gmn hari km? hari aq sangat melelahkan :( pagi2 udah dapet email dari ibu negara tentang masalah *sigh* trus sampe kantor yaaaa diselesaikan satu persatu karena ada banyaaaaaaaaaaak ternyata...
udah ngga semangat sebenernya karena pagi2 udah dapet hal yang hmmm sebenrnya antara sedih dan seeng sih, aq seneng karena akhirnya kmu sms aq setelah sekian lama hehehhehe tapi aq sedih sama isi smsnya..hiks...cuma memperhatikan hal kecil yang tidak disukai diantara banyak hal lain yang aq ceritakan :(( tapi...entahlah...
sepi sekali rasanya...Hp aq ngga pernah bunyi sama sekali skrg :( sangat menyedihkan, sms, telp *sigh* bahkan pulsa jadi awet karena ngga pernah dipake tapi aq ngga suka kya bgtu...
besok aq mau ke klien baru, jauh aja neh tapiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sebenernya ada senengnya juga karena aq akan melewati tempat2 yang dulu sering kita kunjungi kalau aq pulang dari penjara, kalau kmu selalu jemput, rasanya pengen nangis dan udah nangis beneran kmrn waktu lewat situ pas pulangnya, semua hal yang dilewati berasa ada kamunya...
aq jadi ngerasa kya bella swan di buku eclipse yang kmu kasih ke aq..yang merasa dimana2 ada edward waktu edward ninggalin dia, udah berasa kya mayat hidup yang penuh dengan kenangan, berasa semua orang yang lewat, semua peristiwa yang terjadi, semuanya ada kamunya hiks sedih sekali :(
km dimana?
akankah kembali?
aq selalu berharap dan menanti
cepatlah pulang...
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udah tidur?sepertinya udah sih...
hmmmm gmn hari km? hari aq sangat melelahkan :( pagi2 udah dapet email dari ibu negara tentang masalah *sigh* trus sampe kantor yaaaa diselesaikan satu persatu karena ada banyaaaaaaaaaaak ternyata...
udah ngga semangat sebenernya karena pagi2 udah dapet hal yang hmmm sebenrnya antara sedih dan seeng sih, aq seneng karena akhirnya kmu sms aq setelah sekian lama hehehhehe tapi aq sedih sama isi smsnya..hiks...cuma memperhatikan hal kecil yang tidak disukai diantara banyak hal lain yang aq ceritakan :(( tapi...entahlah...
sepi sekali rasanya...Hp aq ngga pernah bunyi sama sekali skrg :( sangat menyedihkan, sms, telp *sigh* bahkan pulsa jadi awet karena ngga pernah dipake tapi aq ngga suka kya bgtu...
besok aq mau ke klien baru, jauh aja neh tapiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sebenernya ada senengnya juga karena aq akan melewati tempat2 yang dulu sering kita kunjungi kalau aq pulang dari penjara, kalau kmu selalu jemput, rasanya pengen nangis dan udah nangis beneran kmrn waktu lewat situ pas pulangnya, semua hal yang dilewati berasa ada kamunya...
aq jadi ngerasa kya bella swan di buku eclipse yang kmu kasih ke aq..yang merasa dimana2 ada edward waktu edward ninggalin dia, udah berasa kya mayat hidup yang penuh dengan kenangan, berasa semua orang yang lewat, semua peristiwa yang terjadi, semuanya ada kamunya hiks sedih sekali :(
km dimana?
akankah kembali?
aq selalu berharap dan menanti
cepatlah pulang...
kembalilah... Read More..
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Academic Module 4
Writing Task 2
The proliferation of private cars on the roads in many part of the world has led to serious problems of pollution and may contribute to global warming. Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public transportation systems in order to help alleviate this problem. Others think it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other type of cars that may cause less pollution.
Do you think it is better for governments to spend money developing public transportation or developing new kinds of cars? Why or why not? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays people have a high mobilization. They have to move to more than one place in a day. It makes many people spend their money to buy a private car. Because it can makes their movement easier. It solve people problem about high mobilization. In addition, it happens in many part of the world.
Many private cars on roads combines with much public transportation will product more pollution. Pollution makes us difficult to get fresh air. Pollution makes us feel not comfortable. We need to use masker when we want to walk on roads because of the bad air. Moreover, this pollution will lead us to a serious problem such as global warming.
Our ozone will get the bad effect of bad air from pollution. In addition, it will contribute us to global warming. We need to find the solution about this.
Many people have given their idea for solving this. Some people think that government should spend money for the development of public transportation system that can alleviate this problem. Those people thinks, when government can make this kind of public transportation, so pollution from public transportation will decrease. Moreover, through this solution, maybe some private cars users will back to use public transportation than their own car.
However, other thinks that it is better to spend money for developing of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution. Through this solution, we hope that people will buy a new private car which is already has a good system to solve pollution problem. In other ways, people can buy any electric things that also already have a good system to solve or decrease pollution problems.
I agree with the first idea. Because I think, all people more capable to do this than the second idea. For the first idea, we can make a campaign for using this kind of public transportation for people who has private cars. In addition, for people who usually use public transportation is not a problem for them. Nevertheless, for the second idea, only people who have much money can do this. Private car is using only for a few people but public transportation can be used for many people. In addition, for other electric things, I am not sure that the price will be affordable. We need a good system in there so we will spend much money in there. Therefore, only a few people who can buy and use this. Overall, we need to manage our self-better.
We need to use something without doubt about our environment. Because when our environment has a problem, the effects will come to our life.
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Writing Task 2
The proliferation of private cars on the roads in many part of the world has led to serious problems of pollution and may contribute to global warming. Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public transportation systems in order to help alleviate this problem. Others think it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other type of cars that may cause less pollution.
Do you think it is better for governments to spend money developing public transportation or developing new kinds of cars? Why or why not? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays people have a high mobilization. They have to move to more than one place in a day. It makes many people spend their money to buy a private car. Because it can makes their movement easier. It solve people problem about high mobilization. In addition, it happens in many part of the world.
Many private cars on roads combines with much public transportation will product more pollution. Pollution makes us difficult to get fresh air. Pollution makes us feel not comfortable. We need to use masker when we want to walk on roads because of the bad air. Moreover, this pollution will lead us to a serious problem such as global warming.
Our ozone will get the bad effect of bad air from pollution. In addition, it will contribute us to global warming. We need to find the solution about this.
Many people have given their idea for solving this. Some people think that government should spend money for the development of public transportation system that can alleviate this problem. Those people thinks, when government can make this kind of public transportation, so pollution from public transportation will decrease. Moreover, through this solution, maybe some private cars users will back to use public transportation than their own car.
However, other thinks that it is better to spend money for developing of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution. Through this solution, we hope that people will buy a new private car which is already has a good system to solve pollution problem. In other ways, people can buy any electric things that also already have a good system to solve or decrease pollution problems.
I agree with the first idea. Because I think, all people more capable to do this than the second idea. For the first idea, we can make a campaign for using this kind of public transportation for people who has private cars. In addition, for people who usually use public transportation is not a problem for them. Nevertheless, for the second idea, only people who have much money can do this. Private car is using only for a few people but public transportation can be used for many people. In addition, for other electric things, I am not sure that the price will be affordable. We need a good system in there so we will spend much money in there. Therefore, only a few people who can buy and use this. Overall, we need to manage our self-better.
We need to use something without doubt about our environment. Because when our environment has a problem, the effects will come to our life.
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# Modal verbs (1)
# Other (1)
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# Wordiness (2)
# Punctuation within a sentence (3)
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the
responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
Everything in life always balanced. Where there is big, there is small. Where there is old, there is young. It is also happen to wealth people and poorer people. Almost in all country, there are poorer people. They have become poor with many kind of reason. Wealthy nations should have responsibility to take care of them. Every wealthy nation has many things that the poorer do not have. They should share what they have. For the first time, maybe it is not easy but they must to try. All of them have their things because they work hard so they feel little bit stingy to share what they have.
Not all of the poorer people are lazy people. Many of them also try to work hard to make their life better. They try to do anything to make money. They do not feel shame of what they do even it is not good in wealthy nation’s eyes, but they want to do that because they need money to live. Wealthy nations need to share something with them. They need to provide such things as food and education. Both of these things are the most important things for poorer. Wealthy nation need to care about their education because if they have a high education, they can find their way to make money by themselves. Food is the main things in life. People need to eat everyday so they need to share food also to the poorer.
Some people think that this kind of activities is the government responsibility. Government has responsibility to look after their citizens, but they can do this by themselves. Government has many duties for the country and the citizens. As wealthy nations, we need to help the government in doing their duties. In this case, we need to help government in taking care of the poorer. Government has their own program to look after the poorer. They try to make the poorer can live better. As wealthy nations, we can help this duty. We can provide something for one or two poor people that we meet. It is already help the government.
The government has a responsibility to take care about the poorer, but wealthy nations should care to the poorer too. Wealthy nations have many things in their life and have a better life than the poorer, so they need to share.
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November 2010
hari ini 1 tahun yang lalu, sungguh sangat menyenangkan, qta lagi brngkt pulang dari perjalanan sangat menyenangkan selama 4 hari 3 malam, perjalanan yang diawali dengan pertengkaran hehhehehe tapi diakhiri dengan manis sekali :)
sungguh aq senang sekali waktu itu, aq tulis di diary aq looooh :)
hari ini, saat ini :((
sungguh sangat menyedihkan karena aq sama sekali ngga bisa bilang sekedar selamat pagi karena aq ngga bisa menghubungi kmu :((
di status2 kmu, kmu menceritakan pada seluruh duni kalau hari ini kmu akan memulai perjalanan kembali dan tanpa aq :((
bukan hanya tidak hanya pergi sama aq tapi juga tidak bilang sama aq :((
sungguh sangat menyedihkan hari2 ini, tidak adanya kepahaman sama sekali di antara qta..semua hanya berdasarkan asumsi yang membuat qta menjadi makin salah paham :(( hal tersebut sangat menyedihkan karena membuat hai qta masing2 makin sakiiit dan terluka karena kata2 yang tidak seharusnya ada..karena sesungguhnya keinginan qta adalah sama, kengininan qta adalah satu yaitu bersama,,tapi knp harus ada semua ini????:((
aq berharap masih ada 1 kesempatan, 1 waktu untuk qta bisa saling menjelaskan satu sama lain dan saling mengungkapkan kerinduan terdalam dari satu sama lain..
semoga...
aq sangat merindukan kmu..
sangat...
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hari ini 1 tahun yang lalu, sungguh sangat menyenangkan, qta lagi brngkt pulang dari perjalanan sangat menyenangkan selama 4 hari 3 malam, perjalanan yang diawali dengan pertengkaran hehhehehe tapi diakhiri dengan manis sekali :)
sungguh aq senang sekali waktu itu, aq tulis di diary aq looooh :)
hari ini, saat ini :((
sungguh sangat menyedihkan karena aq sama sekali ngga bisa bilang sekedar selamat pagi karena aq ngga bisa menghubungi kmu :((
di status2 kmu, kmu menceritakan pada seluruh duni kalau hari ini kmu akan memulai perjalanan kembali dan tanpa aq :((
bukan hanya tidak hanya pergi sama aq tapi juga tidak bilang sama aq :((
sungguh sangat menyedihkan hari2 ini, tidak adanya kepahaman sama sekali di antara qta..semua hanya berdasarkan asumsi yang membuat qta menjadi makin salah paham :(( hal tersebut sangat menyedihkan karena membuat hai qta masing2 makin sakiiit dan terluka karena kata2 yang tidak seharusnya ada..karena sesungguhnya keinginan qta adalah sama, kengininan qta adalah satu yaitu bersama,,tapi knp harus ada semua ini????:((
aq berharap masih ada 1 kesempatan, 1 waktu untuk qta bisa saling menjelaskan satu sama lain dan saling mengungkapkan kerinduan terdalam dari satu sama lain..
semoga...
aq sangat merindukan kmu..
sangat...
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Sunday, November 6, 2011
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kau tak tahu berapa banyak waktu yang kulalui bersamamu
kau takkan tahu betapa kau berarti bagiku
kau takkan mengerti sejauh mana perjalanan ini kita lewati
dan disinilah kita,dimana perasaan itu berpaut, bersemi, juga luruh
aq takkan sempurna tanpamu
hariku takkan kembali bila kau tak disitu
dan malamku akan jadi penantian panjang dibawah badai yang menderu
aku mencintaimu, tak cukupkah itu?
ku sayang padamu, masihkah kau ragu?
mungkin itu memang tak cukup
tuk menenangkan hatimu
tak cukup tuk miliki dirimu
kau tak kan mengerti betapa kau berarti bagiku
kau takkan sadari betapa banyak ruang yang telah kau isi
dan takkan terganti…
bila ini harus terhenti, bolehkah aku bertanya
kenapa di saat telah ku berikan langitku untukmu?
kenpa di saat rasa itu merapat dan membawa kita satu?
kenapa di saat tak ada kau, tiada aku, hanya kita?
namun bila ini harus berakhir
terhenti, sampai disini
dan apa yang kan ku katakan tak penting lagi
aku hanya ingin kau mengerti
betapa ku menyayangimu
betapa ku ingin kau disini, disisiku slalu
jika aq boleh berharap
jika aku boleh memohon
janganlah pergi, tetaplah disini
tolong tetaplah disini
tidak selamanya, hanya sesaat saja…
karena takkan kutemukan bintang lagi seperti dirimu..
takkan ku temukan gerimis lagi seperti saat itu
dan takkan ku temukan hati yang lain seperti hatimu
karena kau akan tetap jadi kau
yang kusayang
yang ku rindu
apapun artinya itu…
dedicated to my ginger :(
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sore ginger..
udah lagi apa?
kata lttd kmu ada dirumah dari 2 jam yang lalu...hmmm agak aneh sih karena seharusnya kamu ada di kantor jam2 segini hari ini. Hmmm apa kmu bolos yiaaaaaa...huuuu bolos mulu dah :p
klo beneran bolos semoga bukan karena hal2 yang tidak diinginkan yiaaaa *amin*
aq lagi bikin surat rekomendasi waktu Hp aq bunyi dan ternyata ada email masuk. Hiks..hati aq langsung berasa kya disirem air es, ada email dari yahoo yang bilang klo salah satu alamat email kmu udah ngga ada sehingga aq dapet info failed report :( sedih sekali rasanya membaca email itu, ngga kebayang klo semua yang aq tahu akan menghilang satu per satu...pliz..jangan sampe deh itu terjadi...:(
kmrn aq udah ngerasa seneng bgd waktu liat lttd kmu udah aktif lagi tapi hari ini aq ngerasa menaranya runtuh lagi :((
ngomong2 kmrn aq merasa hmmm rada bodoh dan sedih bgd sih akhirnya karena kmrn pas aq pulang aq cek lttd dan aq liat klo km ada di daerah2 deket bgd sama aq, trus spontan aq langsung dial nomor kmu dan...hiks...aq sedih sekali karena aq lupa kalau aq ngga bisa melakukan itu lagi :(
ingin rasanya cepet pergi dari sini tapi....
semangat aq ngga ada buat itu...aq sedang mencoba memupuknya sedikit demi sedikit tapi aq ngga bisa menghentikan tangan aq untuk melakukan dial ke nomor km, liat smua media yang aq atau sekedar ngecek lttd sebisanya..
ada kejutan di blog ini kalau ada yg periksain writing aq, aq sangat berharap itu adalah kmu...semoga aq benar kali ini...aq tunggu kmu...selalu...
kembalilah...
hanya itu yang aq pinta.. Read More..
udah lagi apa?
kata lttd kmu ada dirumah dari 2 jam yang lalu...hmmm agak aneh sih karena seharusnya kamu ada di kantor jam2 segini hari ini. Hmmm apa kmu bolos yiaaaaaa...huuuu bolos mulu dah :p
klo beneran bolos semoga bukan karena hal2 yang tidak diinginkan yiaaaa *amin*
aq lagi bikin surat rekomendasi waktu Hp aq bunyi dan ternyata ada email masuk. Hiks..hati aq langsung berasa kya disirem air es, ada email dari yahoo yang bilang klo salah satu alamat email kmu udah ngga ada sehingga aq dapet info failed report :( sedih sekali rasanya membaca email itu, ngga kebayang klo semua yang aq tahu akan menghilang satu per satu...pliz..jangan sampe deh itu terjadi...:(
kmrn aq udah ngerasa seneng bgd waktu liat lttd kmu udah aktif lagi tapi hari ini aq ngerasa menaranya runtuh lagi :((
ngomong2 kmrn aq merasa hmmm rada bodoh dan sedih bgd sih akhirnya karena kmrn pas aq pulang aq cek lttd dan aq liat klo km ada di daerah2 deket bgd sama aq, trus spontan aq langsung dial nomor kmu dan...hiks...aq sedih sekali karena aq lupa kalau aq ngga bisa melakukan itu lagi :(
ingin rasanya cepet pergi dari sini tapi....
semangat aq ngga ada buat itu...aq sedang mencoba memupuknya sedikit demi sedikit tapi aq ngga bisa menghentikan tangan aq untuk melakukan dial ke nomor km, liat smua media yang aq atau sekedar ngecek lttd sebisanya..
ada kejutan di blog ini kalau ada yg periksain writing aq, aq sangat berharap itu adalah kmu...semoga aq benar kali ini...aq tunggu kmu...selalu...
kembalilah...
hanya itu yang aq pinta.. Read More..
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WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Today people like fast food
In the high-income area, hamburgers get 45 pence per person per week as their fast food. In the second place, there are pizzas that get 19 pence per person per week while fish and chips get only 17 pence per person per week. In the average-income area, hamburgers also get the best pence, but there is a different from the high-income level for the second place. In this area, fish and chips take the second place with 25 pence per person per week. The last one is pizzas with only 13 pence per person per week. People in the low-income have different taste with people in the average and high income. They like fish and chips the most. The most favorite fast food in the high and average income is becoming the second place in this area. It takes 14 pence per person per week.
The consumption of fast food grows in a different way according to the kinds of its fast food. The hamburgers move rapidly from 1970 to 1990. It moves from 100 gram to more than 500 gram in 1990. The fish and chips get the best point in 1970 with 300 gram, but it slowly moves down in until 250 gram in 1985. Although it can move up again in the middle of 1985 and 1990, but it cannot reach the top point like in the 1970. Pizzas grow in the other way. In the early 1970 until 1975, pizzas keep steady in 50 gram, but in the 1980, it starts to move up. Although pizzas movement is not as fast as hamburgers, but it shows movement start from 1985. In the end of 1990, pizzas can get almost 300 gram. We can conclude that people like fast food.
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Heeyyy ginger..
Gmn kabar hr ini?
Kerjaan ok!?pastinyaaa yiaaa..aq liat status km ceria sekali dan ehem..akhirnya diterima juga tawaran itu yiaaa!?hmmm yakin ga mau ajak aq neh..sendirian donk dsana atau...................................?hihihi lucu juga c ajak2 mereka ksana..yaaaa sekalian jalan2 juga kan!?
Hr ini hmmm dr kmrn c..aq chat sama si honey..sungguh setiap yg dibicarakan..aq jd selalu blg..'kata c kk' hahahaha..kya udh merema aja kata2nya jadinya inget terus hehehe..soalnya qta ngomongin dy yg bru beli tas yg mahal ampun, can you guess?500rb..wow..keren bgd..aq aja ngga berani hahaha..kata c kk ga worth it hehehe..aq blg gtu sama dy dan km tau ngga jawabannya apa?hati aq tergelitik sih krn itu jawaban yg aq pake dlu dan hmmm skrng juga msh *dikit hehe* yuuupzz..bener bgd..karena aq pengen :D
Seneng deh rasanya jd org yg berbeda dan memang bgtu kan..kya tulisan di blog ini deh..not an ordinary hehehe..
Padahal bulan ini aq emg pgn beli tas buat kerja soalnya ngga jadi2 pula udh dr kapan tau deh, bahkan mau beli kemeja kerja juga ngga jd2 hahahaha..btw soal kemeja kerja..sedih deh ada 2 baju aq yg udh hmmm ngga bagus gtu deh..kan dlunya lengannya ada karetnya, naha skrng kendor gtu jd krg bagus dilihatnya :( dan salah satunya adlh si baju kembar..hiks sedih sekali..:(
Makanya pengen beli baru.,*pgn kembar lg sih tapi..,*
Oia kmrn pagi mama cerita klo brg yg dibeli brg ma laptop aq dlu udh lunas..seneng deh..hmmm sebenernya yg lbh aq inget waktu cerita itu adlh laptop aq nya hehehehe..inget peristiwa pembeliannya..bersejarah bgd tuh..salah satu yg bersejarah dalam hidup..syg kisahnya kebakar brg lumbung yg aq bakar sendiri secara sadar *grrrrr* sebel juga klo inget2 itu :(
Hmmm ada sedikit kecurigaan timbul di hati aq saat liat lttd km ngga aktif2..hmm apa hp kembarnya udh ngga dipake lg?*semoga aq salah hush hush hush..jauh2 deh dr pikiran buruk itu* hmmm thinking positif aja klo km ngga aktifin lg lttdnya..pdhl aq msh suka..sering malah liat2..hiks..salah satu media menyenangkan deh..dy bisa ceritain ke aq km lg apa hanya dengan ngeliat posisi km dmn..tp skrng udh 5 hari dy ngga berubah2 :(
Hari ini 2 nov 2011..udh bulan nov..inget ga ada peristiwa bersejarah apa?
Bbrp hari lg sih..
Hayoooo tebak..
Ditunggu jawabannya :)
barusan liat lttd dan punya kmu aktif...
senaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang :) walaupun aq cuma bisa liatin doang..
Read More..
Gmn kabar hr ini?
Kerjaan ok!?pastinyaaa yiaaa..aq liat status km ceria sekali dan ehem..akhirnya diterima juga tawaran itu yiaaa!?hmmm yakin ga mau ajak aq neh..sendirian donk dsana atau...................................?hihihi lucu juga c ajak2 mereka ksana..yaaaa sekalian jalan2 juga kan!?
Hr ini hmmm dr kmrn c..aq chat sama si honey..sungguh setiap yg dibicarakan..aq jd selalu blg..'kata c kk' hahahaha..kya udh merema aja kata2nya jadinya inget terus hehehe..soalnya qta ngomongin dy yg bru beli tas yg mahal ampun, can you guess?500rb..wow..keren bgd..aq aja ngga berani hahaha..kata c kk ga worth it hehehe..aq blg gtu sama dy dan km tau ngga jawabannya apa?hati aq tergelitik sih krn itu jawaban yg aq pake dlu dan hmmm skrng juga msh *dikit hehe* yuuupzz..bener bgd..karena aq pengen :D
Seneng deh rasanya jd org yg berbeda dan memang bgtu kan..kya tulisan di blog ini deh..not an ordinary hehehe..
Padahal bulan ini aq emg pgn beli tas buat kerja soalnya ngga jadi2 pula udh dr kapan tau deh, bahkan mau beli kemeja kerja juga ngga jd2 hahahaha..btw soal kemeja kerja..sedih deh ada 2 baju aq yg udh hmmm ngga bagus gtu deh..kan dlunya lengannya ada karetnya, naha skrng kendor gtu jd krg bagus dilihatnya :( dan salah satunya adlh si baju kembar..hiks sedih sekali..:(
Makanya pengen beli baru.,*pgn kembar lg sih tapi..,*
Oia kmrn pagi mama cerita klo brg yg dibeli brg ma laptop aq dlu udh lunas..seneng deh..hmmm sebenernya yg lbh aq inget waktu cerita itu adlh laptop aq nya hehehehe..inget peristiwa pembeliannya..bersejarah bgd tuh..salah satu yg bersejarah dalam hidup..syg kisahnya kebakar brg lumbung yg aq bakar sendiri secara sadar *grrrrr* sebel juga klo inget2 itu :(
Hmmm ada sedikit kecurigaan timbul di hati aq saat liat lttd km ngga aktif2..hmm apa hp kembarnya udh ngga dipake lg?*semoga aq salah hush hush hush..jauh2 deh dr pikiran buruk itu* hmmm thinking positif aja klo km ngga aktifin lg lttdnya..pdhl aq msh suka..sering malah liat2..hiks..salah satu media menyenangkan deh..dy bisa ceritain ke aq km lg apa hanya dengan ngeliat posisi km dmn..tp skrng udh 5 hari dy ngga berubah2 :(
Hari ini 2 nov 2011..udh bulan nov..inget ga ada peristiwa bersejarah apa?
Bbrp hari lg sih..
Hayoooo tebak..
Ditunggu jawabannya :)
barusan liat lttd dan punya kmu aktif...
senaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang :) walaupun aq cuma bisa liatin doang..
Read More..
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Wednesday, November 2, 2011
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WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Australian Bureau of Meteorology has
Australian Bureau of Meteorology will do analysis and forecasting the information that they get from those three sources. Their team will process the information by calculating and describing the information places, weather, condition, and prediction for the next. When they have all the information, they will prepare the information in a news format. They will send the news format to media. The media will broadcast the information.
There are many media nowadays. These media
Score By : Grammarly : 85
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Score: 100
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Dear bee..
apa kbrnya km?km baik2 aja kan!?soalnya terakhir kali aq sama ginger mau periksain km kan ngga jadi..semoga km baik2 aja yiaaaa..
Aq kangen sekali sama kmu..tiap aq liat yg sejenis km lewat, aq jd dagdigdug, apakah itu km atau bukan!?huhuhuhu
Sore td aq main ke tempat favorite qta..aq mondar mandir di tempat biasa km nongkrong..huhuhu sedih sekali rasanya,.berharap km ada disitu dan menunggu aq..
Bee,
Ginger apa kabar?apa dy msh malas bersihin km?gmn jam yg dr aq?udh dy perbaikin?maaf yiaaa bee, jamnya emg bkn khusus buat kmu..aq msh blm ketemu yg seperti itu..klo ketemu aq akan segera kasih ke kmu deh..pgn sekali ksh langsung tapi..
Bee,
Jagain ginger yiaaaa..klo dy suka ajak km jalan ngga bener, km ngambek aja..hihihi jd inget dlu..klo gingernya lg bete sama aq eh kmunya yg ngambek..skrng juga bee..biar dy baikan sama aq hehe..
Bee,
kangen sekali..huhuhuhuhu..
72 jam terlewati :( Read More..
apa kbrnya km?km baik2 aja kan!?soalnya terakhir kali aq sama ginger mau periksain km kan ngga jadi..semoga km baik2 aja yiaaaa..
Aq kangen sekali sama kmu..tiap aq liat yg sejenis km lewat, aq jd dagdigdug, apakah itu km atau bukan!?huhuhuhu
Sore td aq main ke tempat favorite qta..aq mondar mandir di tempat biasa km nongkrong..huhuhu sedih sekali rasanya,.berharap km ada disitu dan menunggu aq..
Bee,
Ginger apa kabar?apa dy msh malas bersihin km?gmn jam yg dr aq?udh dy perbaikin?maaf yiaaa bee, jamnya emg bkn khusus buat kmu..aq msh blm ketemu yg seperti itu..klo ketemu aq akan segera kasih ke kmu deh..pgn sekali ksh langsung tapi..
Bee,
Jagain ginger yiaaaa..klo dy suka ajak km jalan ngga bener, km ngambek aja..hihihi jd inget dlu..klo gingernya lg bete sama aq eh kmunya yg ngambek..skrng juga bee..biar dy baikan sama aq hehe..
Bee,
kangen sekali..huhuhuhuhu..
72 jam terlewati :( Read More..
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
You should write at least 250 words. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
People need music in their life. Music contains of many things that we never think. The important thing is music can show feelings more than words can. Music can make people smile, laugh, or maybe cry. Music makes harmony in life. People enjoy music at many part of their life, not only in Physical life but also in spiritual life. Many religions use music to tell about their value in life.
There are many kinds of music. Start from the slow one to the hard one. It can describe a level of people. The old one like classic music because it is slow and makes people feels comfort and relaxes. The young people like beat music like rock, pop rock, alternative, and others that will show the energy of the music. Music can come to people mind easily. People use music to makes their heart and mind feel comfort.
In every country, there is traditional music. The traditional music comes from the earlier people in one area. They find or invent the traditional music from simple tools. In the past, they use it for tell message to others. Then, other uses it together with other tools to make music. People need to know about traditional music because it is one of the national treasures of one country. People need to keep it alive so they need to know and learn about it. Maybe not all of traditional music is easy listening and interesting to play like the modern one, but they still need to keep it.
People need to thank to some musician who can combine the traditional music with the modern music. They can make a new kind of music. They make music library richer. They also keep the traditional music alive. We need more people to do this to make the traditional one still alive, so the next day when the children grow up, they can know about their traditional music.
The modern music is also important. It makes people knowledge about music grow up. In addition, people need to combine one to other modern music to make it more beautiful. Finally, people need to learn and keep all kind of music even it is traditional or modern. People can make any different of them, they need to make the same facilities for others who want to play and learn.
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