Tuesday, November 15, 2011
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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Having career is important in life. Now, people try to not only work but also build their career in their workplace. When people want to join in a company, they try to ask about how is the career in there. They need to know whether they can grow up their career in their or not. In the past, people try to have at least one steadily career in their life. They need that to guarantee their life and their family for people who already have a family.
Nowadays, a single career is not enough. People try to have more than one career in their life. They try to join in some activity besides of their main job in order to have more money and career. Many people have more than one title. They try to join more than one company and have other position.
There are some ways for people today to reach several careers. Some of them try to find others ways of earning moneys. They try to join a multilevel marketing that will make them get money without leaving their main job. Some of them try to build their own company. They try with a little one like shop. They try to sell their goods by online, so they do not need to have a real shop yet. They can do this without leaving their main job too.
Other people try to get further education. They believe that if they can reach a high level of education, they can be easier to have several careers. These kinds of people go back to college to get their title after work. They do not leave their main job.
There are many ways for getting several careers. Many people think that a better life will come when they have several careers. I agree with this because when we have several careers, we can get several ways to get money. It makes us get more money than usual people who just do a single career. Although we need more effort than other when we want to have these careers, but we can get more than those people get too.
Score : 97
Vocabulary use (1)
Total Words: 357
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Having career is important in life. Now, people try to not only work but also build their career in their workplace. When people want to join in a company, they try to ask about how is the career in there. They need to know whether they can grow up their career in their or not. In the past, people try to have at least one steadily career in their life. They need that to guarantee their life and their family for people who already have a family.
Nowadays, a single career is not enough. People try to have more than one career in their life. They try to join in some activity besides of their main job in order to have more money and career. Many people have more than one title. They try to join more than one company and have other position.
There are some ways for people today to reach several careers. Some of them try to find others ways of earning moneys. They try to join a multilevel marketing that will make them get money without leaving their main job. Some of them try to build their own company. They try with a little one like shop. They try to sell their goods by online, so they do not need to have a real shop yet. They can do this without leaving their main job too.
Other people try to get further education. They believe that if they can reach a high level of education, they can be easier to have several careers. These kinds of people go back to college to get their title after work. They do not leave their main job.
There are many ways for getting several careers. Many people think that a better life will come when they have several careers. I agree with this because when we have several careers, we can get several ways to get money. It makes us get more money than usual people who just do a single career. Although we need more effort than other when we want to have these careers, but we can get more than those people get too.
Score : 97
Vocabulary use (1)
Total Words: 357
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fronita
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