Thursday, November 24, 2011 at 1:16 PM |

WRITING TASK 2
You should write at least 250 words.

Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.


Crime is a bad thing. Almost in every place in the world, there will be a criminal. A crime can happen because of many things. A criminal has many reasons to do their actions. The most commonly reason is lake of money to fulfill their needs. People can do anything to fulfill their main needs. This reason can make people forget about rule of law. They just think about how to get money. It will cause many criminal.

Every criminal must get punishment. It depends on rule of law of every country. It can be different, but the main function is the same. There are many kinds of punishment. Usually it depends on the kind of crime. Capital punishment or the death penalty is the highest punishment of the world. Every country has agreed about this. If a country does this kind of punishment, it must be for a very dangerous crime that causes many troubles to many people.

A statement says every country need to do capital punishment to control violence in society. If a country announces that there will be a capital punishment, criminal will be afraid. They will not try to do a crime because they feel afraid of the punishment. In other case, criminals will search a way to escape from the punishment. I do not agree that capital punishment can control violence in society because the main things we need to do is to keep people do right things. Government need to make people live in peace. They need to make a stabilize condition to make people can fulfill their main needs.
A country needs to have a capital punishment, but it can depend on that punishment to control violence. The main things that need to do is make a stabilize condition to make people can fulfill their needs without do a crime.


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