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WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In the globalization era, women position has changed. Women act like men. They can work like men. Women can take a high education that can make them have a high position in their workplace. Furthermore, there is a woman who becomes a country leader. It is not a bad fact. Women have their right to do anything like men. They have right to get career like men. They can do that, but they should not forget their main character as a mother.
Mother is a greatest job in the world. Whatever condition of a woman in this world, she must to take this job. Women are the only human that can get pregnant and give a birth. After they have children, they must to take care of them. Women must give their care and love to their babies. Men must to love and care their children too, but only women who have a greatest relationship to the children especially when they are still babies.
Nowadays, there are many young problems such as juvenile delinquency. In many cases, this condition can happen because the young people are less of care from their parents. We cannot avoid women to work, but women need to realize about their character. They need to do their main character first than do their jobs. Women need to stay at home and take care of their children especially when they are still young. Women need to tell many things about life to their children. If children get a lot of love and care, they will not look for it outside their home by doing bad things.
It is not bad to get a high career for women, but women must make it balance with their main jobs in home. Women must be wise in reaching what their want if they have married and have children. If it happens, women can get a happy family and a high career. Their children can live happily too.
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